I disagree with the majority of this feedback its unstructured and fails to explain where I have gone wrong and what i can do to improve my practice its clearly indicate I have stuck to the two colours plus stock and then says they dont work as part of a set i need to look at colour and style?? They are both hand rendered and use the same colours and stock one is an image of a cocktail glass and the other the recipe for the cocktail?! I do agree with I should try and do the images on the computer rather than hand rendered I want to begin the posters again with another of my ideas for the final outcome they look unprofessional.